"Wow," is exactly what I said aloud as I finished reading this. I...loved this. The structure works well with the feel of this; the thoughts, so poignant, amaze. Well, well done.


1. A fantastical place you might say,
somewhere that could never exist...but it does.
They found it, and they live there evermore.
One may scoff, and call this fantasy.
For even though they found it, we will not. - I just absolutely love this paragraph!

2. When a small thing, unseable to our eyes, takes the life of a child - "unseeable"

3. They found it after leaving this one, on that day the fire came.
They found a life in that world...
....after losing it in ours. - The perfect ending line.

Honestly, this is just incredible.